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My Kryptonite

Your eyes draw me in from across the room
My legs get weak, I tremble and swoon
Your smile is like honey to a bee
It's so tempting, succulent and sweet.
As you draw closer I can feel the heat of your skin
Thoughts race through my mind, unforgivable sins.
The taste of your kiss lingers on my lips
A feeling, a thought, what is this?
Like a drug slowly takes over a brain
Your love has left on me a stain.
A stain of passion and desire
That is now raging like a fire.
Oh how I have longed for your tongue to dance with mine
For our souls to dance and intertwine.
Your love has taken over my soul
You now have obtained complete control.

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VampiressMiriam

Option 4) Phrases -"Oh how I have longed for your tongue to dance with mine."

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  • kitsmith
    February 1

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    Hey, this is great! Very sensual.. almost erotic, but not quite. It's really good. I've felt this way many times

    Thanks for sharing this, sis.