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You're My Escape

I never wrote love songs
Not before you came along
Had these walls built up so high
I forgot what it meant to fly
It’s like you opened my eyes
Helped me finally realize
Maybe, after all
It’s not so bad to fall

You gave me something to sing about
A reason to let my guard down
Never felt this way before
Make me reach for something more
I can’t wait to see where this will go
With you, feel so alive, and oh
Never thought I’d ever feel this way
You, You’re my
You’re my escape

Angel in disguise
Not like the other guys
Doesn’t feel like falling with you
It feels like floating

You gave me something to sing about
A reason to let my guard down
Never felt this way before
Make me reach for something more
I can’t wait to see where this will go
With you, feel so alive, and oh
Never thought I’d ever feel this way
You, You’re my
You’re my escape

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  • lovesky
    December 4, 2008
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    I really like it , great start keep going please!


  • HopeForUnity
    December 4, 2008
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    a decent start indeed.
    very interesting that when we've become accustomed to being alone and not knowing how to spread our wings and take flight, that someone special comes along and we automatically know how to fly.
    well done and please, keep up the amazing writes


  • sevnsyn silver member
    December 3, 2008
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    Beautiful

    I love it the way it is..I am happy you posted it..Good luck in all you do.....