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Deja Vu Keeps Me Company

Is this just a dream
or a dream come true?
when I see me in your arms,
is it deja vu?

And tell me, tell me
won’t you please
could this be
our true destiny?

I  get the eerie feeling
I’ve been here before
Then I see you waltzing 
with me across the floor
Like all the dreams I’ve ever had
who could ask for more.


So when you’re not around
I don’t get lost in misery
I still have my dreams
Deja vu keeps me company.

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Option 3 title prompt : Deja vu Keeps Me Company
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  • jimek
    December 19, 2008

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    good job

    Hello,Have I read this before
    maybe two days or three or maybe four
    I've heard it before it seems
    or was it just something
    that was in my dreams

    Did I wish
    good luck to you
    Or is this just another
    Deja vue


  • ResplendentCloud
    December 5, 2008
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    I love your use of the title as the last line <3
    overall, a very charming piece that is loaded with imagry and the rhyming is rather catchy

    but you broke a rule, please reread them please

    good job and good luck
    - Emmy