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Solace on the Sea

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I feel a need to sail away, and

To this ragged shore, say goodbye;
And all I want is a sturdy ol' ship,

To master the margin of tide;

All I wish for is wind to carry me

Safely there, as it's billowin' by;

And the moon and brilliant stars,

Hopeful promises of a sunny sky,

Companionship of a gull overhead,

And my friend waiting on the other side.

 

 

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For my friend in Ireland.

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  • Alyzeh
    December 4, 2008

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    That's exactly how I feel at the moment. This is a stunning write!
    I loved the imagery and the use of metaphor. The picture painted is so wonderful, the words are carrying me away. Good luck to you. This is excellent.

    Love
    Alyzeh


  • Paloszoo gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    You have one lucky friend, Sweetie! This is a beautiful piece with rich imagery. I also love the image you chose to compliment it. The flow and rhyme are perfect! What a great read!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    John Masefield's "I Must Get Back To The Sea Again" kept coming to me as I read this lovely poem.
    It is more than beautiful...the images you portray here...After my own heart you are...a lover of the sea...I knew there was a strong connection...Every line is a gem to read...This is getting a bookmark!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 4, 2008

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    you know sometimes i think about doing that, just going to one of the coast and just setting sail, but my thing is i don't really have a palace to go, wonderfully done poem, keep it flowing

  • SoulWhispher
    December 4, 2008

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    Your friend should love this, tis so well written, Oh for a sturdy ship, you would master it as you have mastered poetry, great job, blessings with peace and Love John


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 4, 2008

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    beautiful~

    This makes me want to get on a ship and go sailing away..........
    Only would want to do so in warmer weather...better than the 38 degrees and snow showers we are now having...
    Beautiful imagery throughout the poem as well
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • apropos
    December 4, 2008
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    Lovely poem! Made me wish for the salt spray and the distant horizon.


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      December 4, 2008
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      Thank you,

      I thought there was something missing there, the briney sea spray!! Thanks for the gentle reminder!! Thank you for stopping by, you made my day!!

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