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I am a rootless tree.

Boundries are non-existant to me.
I only know two words:  up and out.
I have grown up to learn many things.
I am grown out to see many things.
The world is bigger than I could ever imagine.
I am taken with the world, and so,
I move around.
No roots could ever hold me down.

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  • etoile
    December 12, 2008

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    i like this idea of roots going up and out. i generally like longer poems, so if you expanded on this i would enjoy it much more. but otherwise i still liked the idea. you use good imagery.

    thanks for entering and goodluck