Don't mess with her,
she's not right.
She's all messed up
all curled up tight.
She's got problems,
each and ever night,
so don't mess with her,
don't open that door.
She'll tear you apart,
limb by limb,
and drain your blood,
ounce by ounce.
I warned you
but you had to pursue
and did something
you can't undo.
I warned you.
I told everything,
that was true.
Now you lay there,
all scared and withdrew,
fighting for you life.
But i warned you
and now,
you shall pay the price.
Author notes
i wrote this during my fourth period class.i'm not emo or anything like that
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Comments
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... must i dare say.... scary..... although i couldnt stop reading.... captivating!!!!
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WOW thats all i can realy say is WOW and good luck
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Very dark write , enjoyed reading it!Thanks for sharing!
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