We are all on a path.
A path of our lives,
of our futures.
Our emotions,
our actions,
our beliefs are all controlled by the path
we choose to take.
Is this the path you wish to take?
The one that destroys me?
My self esteem that you shatter.
Do you wish to ruin me,
to make me hate everything i loved?
You attack me so precisely.
Knowing exactly what will set me off.
I just don't understand.
The one who is supposed to love me the most
love me forever...
shows me the most hate.
A contest entry
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Comments
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love it way to go.. thanks for entering my contest Love forever and always
Ciara Ann -
A great poem. Although i've never actually had this happen to me, i know many people that are going through this and it accurately depicts how they feel! Very nice!
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