This world to me
Is nothing but remains
Soon enough there will be
No more blood through their veins
Let the rage sink inside
Let it reach my dead heart
Mortals, your time has come
I'll make your death a work of art
Cry your prayers
Get out of your nightmare
I will get you
Make you beware
Come close to me
With eyes that stare
Closer to me
Your soul, I will not spare
Blood of your lust
Screams of your moans
I am the fiend
With skin of stone
Vampires, we are
Our history is shown
Want to stay alive?
Then meet me, all alone... (laughs evilly)
Your warm body
I want to do more than sucking
I'll give you what you want
Never ending *bunny*
You think I'm beautiful?
Laughing at you
The only one who is
Truly beautiful is no one, but you
Cry your prayers
Get out of your nightmare
I will get you
Make you beware
Come close to me
With eyes that stare
Closer to me
Your soul, I will not spare
Blood of your lust
Screams of your moans
I am the fiend
With skin of stone
Vampires, we are
Our history is shown
Want to stay alive?
Then meet me, all alone... (laughs evilly)
Life, to us, will always be so still
When our moonlight creeping
Waiting for eternal darkness
We'll make the final reaping...
Blood of your lust
Screams of your moans
I am the fiend
With skin of stone
Vampires, we are
Our history is shown
Want to stay alive?
Then meet me, all alone... (laughs evilly)(2x)
Author notes
I was inspired by vampires. Because they are sometimes misunderstood creatures in dead of night. They are sex fiends. They feed on blood. (which actually taste good, don't ask) They were used to be humans. They still long to dead of old or be human again. They are interesting to me. That's why. I hope you like it.
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Comments
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im still looking for true blood in stores but i think its supposed to be alcohol so i wont be able to get any anyway (._.) anyway i love the song and you're right us vampires just wanna be as human as we can its boring after 6 or 700 years to never have a pimple or get sick so somebodys gotta care for you
i love this part best
Let the rage sink inside
Let it reach my dead heart
Mortals, your time has come
I'll make your death a work of art
I hear Cradle of Filth doing this in my head
Killer song
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don't listen to phoenix, it's not that bad. there were only a couple of mistakes in ur AN. ur just fine. amazing song. i love it
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And I'd also advise you to go through your grammar again. Especially in your author notes...
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couldn't it have been a little more original or imaginative?
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I like to hear this song...sounds/reads like a hit.....thank you for entering our contest....novy & brazos
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Oooh I love this! if you could, i'd like you (or somebody else) to sing this and send it to me so I can see how it sounds. (either way you still have a chance)
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I really enjoyed but the rythem was a little off. It was really nice thankyou
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No offense, but let's say my eyes didn't like what they saw. Although cursing and that stuff is good, I'd like to point out that rhyming poetry is something I dislike... but if there's one more thing I dislike, that thing is vampires, and just for the reasons you've defined in your poem. Thanks for entering my contest, though.
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I agree totally that they are misunderstood! I enjoyed this but the flow was a little off to me, and I do understand it was lyrics not just poetry per se. Good luck and thanks for entering!
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Great stuff!!!
Dark & foreboding lyrics...
Great subject matter & execution of the premise with a flowing narrative...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Another goose-bump laden poem! I love the "(laughs evilly)" I am imagining the sounds of Tales from the Crypt, or a very old Boris Karloff movie! Well-done, and enjoyable to read.
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Yes, I do!
I also write in the vampire genre. They fascinate me also. I endoyed your take on the vampire theme. I t reminds me of my own darkness.
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I understand where you are coming from. Many people dont understand them at all> I find them fascinating...and yes blood tastes good.
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thanks. Lol blood is awesome
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