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You're Beautiful

"You're beautiful!"
He always told me,
But who can i trust?

My heart can't break,
There's nothing left to shatter,
You can thank yourself for that,
You always hurt me now,

Even though in the beginning you said you wouldn't,
I drift in and out of nightmares,
It's your fault,
This pain i feel is never-ending,

Don't you dare tell me this was unintentional ,
I'm sick of your lies,
Leave the pieces, i can pick them up myself,

You used to be my knight in shinning armor,
Now i see you're just a fool in tin foil...

Could you sit through this poem?

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  • Scars-On-Her-Arms
    November 8
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    You used to be my knight in shinning armor,
    Now i see you're just a fool in tin foil...

    i love this fucking saying. i have it like written all over my school binders )

    i loved your poem though it was fucking awesome

  • Scars-On-Her-Arms
    April 1

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    "You used to be my night in shinning armor,
    Now i see you're just a fool in tin foil..."

    that was my favorite stanza...its so cute and funnie...i'm still laughing while i write this...lol...but keep on writing...i love reading your poetry....