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To be like Water

We together swim in eternal flight,
our rushing waves crashing upon the shore.
Then we spin and sway in an azure light,
and create secret places to explore.

Then we spin and sway  in an azure light
our hair entwines like the tails of our kites.

We can be like water and freely sway,
while our skin caresses the rhythmic waves.
Let's rest a while at the edge of the bay,
and shelter our babe in ocean side caves.

We can be like water and freely sway,
as aqua children, forever we'll play.

The breeze of the ocean touches my face
before we dive, to greet the waters draft.
Tender and lightly we meet there with grace,
dancing though the sea just as would the daft.

Before we dive to greet the waters draft
the sun would behold our magical craft.

I'd fly through the sea, with you by my side
to hold me sweet in the Deep's nighttime dark.
We'd nimble and glad in loveliness glide;
it'll be with the sea that we make our mark.

It'll be with the sea that we make our mark;
when, my Dear Friend do you wish to embark?

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  • Glasyalabolas
    December 16, 2008

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    This piece overflows with beauty (if you'll pardon the pun), the language and wording takes the prompt and really gives it feeling and evokes the theme strongly.

    Congrats on HM.

    Good write.


  • Erinnn
    December 10, 2008
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    oh my godddd, this is reallly great, I love your description, it's all so perfect,
    great job!