Sagging hopes never
can satiate an enterprising human
Nagging desires, at any time
pains nerves and paints dark picture
Why to swim in despair streams at all ?
Light all your hopes up and treat them well
you are sure to win and wind joy
your mating pleasure with inflated lust
A contest entry
- Seductive Max 50 words 20 poets not a PIF by Unconscious-Energy.
1200 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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LOL Great take... Well done..
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OMG
awesome I loved it..
Mmm
Inflatable friends..
Best wishes and good luck
Julie
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Nicely done... I like the playfulness and the language that toys with the doll title... Best of luck.
Ken
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