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Grandpa's Angel

Momma said
don't get anything on your new angel shirt
so I asked Grandpa
and he let me go out and play in the dirt


I asked Momma for some candy
and she said
absolutely no
so I asked Grandpa for a lollipop
and off to the store we go


I asked Momma for a new toy
and she said
no, Baby, not this week
so I asked Grandpa for a new doll
he bought the one that cries and takes a leak


Momma said
it's bedtime, but I wasn't ready to fall asleep
so I asked Grandpa
and he said let's all take a ride in the jeep
I don't remember what happened next
because that's where I fell sound asleep
I think Grandpa tricked me
but I loved fallin' asleep in his jeep




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  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    Thios is precious and my life! LOL I was grandpa's girl and he never said no...but he made me safe and trust men for many years and my first stuffed animal can from me (I still have it)...turly beautiful!
    Congrat's on the Gold!
    Love,
    sis


  • nilav
    December 4, 2008
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    this gives a light hearted feeling with love and those little fingers....


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Awww, that's righ if mom says no, grandpa says yes. All kids know that. She is absolutely darling. Good luck to you in the contest.


  • OldBear34 silver member
    December 3, 2008
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    Nice Idea!

    Your poem flows well and I love your true to life humor!