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Magical Night

It's mid November and we're laying close
blankets piled high out on the screened-in back porch
We were talking about everything and nothing
when you suddenly sealed my lips with a kiss
so full of passion and longing
you took my breath away

As I returned your kiss you slid your hand down my arm
over my hand
and to my waist
then up my shirt
sending shivers down my spine

I looked up and into your eyes as we slowly undressed each other
and as you pulled yourself on top of me
with gentle hands caressing every inch of my skin
the whole time
Anouther long kiss before you turned your attention to my breasts

Your tongue darting like a snake attacking my nipples
I could feel them growing harder in pleasure
and them tingling pain as you bit them

I ran my hands along your back
loving the hard muscle under them
scraping my nails as I drew closer to your waist
and slipped my hand under your hips

I gasp as you slip inside of me
such a perfect fit
we both gasp and softly moan with each thrust
skin slightly damp and bodies fitted so close
all of the cold seems to be gone

In perfect rhythm we move
and as you suck on that certain spot on my neck
I tighten and we climax together
Again and again until the dawn approaches

At first light we curl up together
exhausted and content in each others arms
We watched the sun rise
and I watched you drift off to sleep
My perfect lover
And I thought to myself
I love this man



Author notes

This is a real experience I had with my ex boyfriend. We arent dating anymore, but we are still close friends and I would still do anything for him.

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  • Pretty Girl
    December 4, 2008

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    AMAZING

    All I can say is INCREDIBLE!!!!! You can take something so personal and turn it into a masterpiece. You can feel the love and the passion between the both of you. Keep on writing this is beautiful and Hot...


  • My Souls Reflection gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    This is really beautiful. I feel the love, I feel the passion, you've painted a wonderfully sensual picture in my mind. Thank you for entering, I love it!

    Annie