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Sunshine

Air,
Water, food, and rain,
Reaching, striving,
To obtain.
True and fierce,
Undying and essential.

Protective,
Loving and fiery.
Eternal,
Paradise.
Golden sunshine,
On pale cheeks.

Cherished freedom,
None can contend,
Kin spirits.
Impossible,
To break apart.
My blissful world.

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Option 4. Friendship- tell me in your own words how much a friendship means to you. How loyal it is to be a friend.

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  • EmeraldDreams
    December 22, 2008

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    This is a lovely piece. You expressed friendship in a wonderful way here. I love how you compare it to sunshine.... it paints a beautiful image !


  • HeavensNewestAngel
    December 3, 2008
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    This is a great poem about a true friendship. Best of luck in my contest!