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Among the Rush



Rush
  rush
rush
love, through wild and wire
to race out the concept child
that we've barely kept awake this time.

So thus grows the moon
  and thus falls the fire
to take a place from within my veins
where I once kept my life,

which leaves me here, looming
    over the edge of a castle I built
on the edge of a swamp
    where demons once lived
but no longer
rush
  rush
Rush



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