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[ Goosebumps travel up my back ]

Goosebumps travel up my back
at this moment
We've been here before
and she knows it.
Her haunting figure
and ghostly shade
make us all quiver
and run,
From this haunting staircase

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A contest entry

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  • michaeline
    December 10, 2008

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    This is really well written.Good luck to you in this contest.Gives me the creeps thinking of someone like that out there.Great job.


  • just mercedes gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    Good response to the prompt picture.

    'we've been here before'

    (cue the music from the X Files)


  • Sandygram
    December 5, 2008

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    Words to haunt! Great write. Alot said in a few lines. Great take on the prompt! Take care, Sandy


  • Nicada silver member
    December 4, 2008

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    This poem is very short, but spooky, and it relates well to the picture prompt. Thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty