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Seeking inspiration for gritty heartbreak poetry.

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A contest entry

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    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Ademon
    December 17, 2008
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    Oooo Pick me Pick me! I give good inspiration? lol simple and yet so direct!!!


    • Amazon Huntress
      December 17, 2008
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      It's funny, you're the first guy to offer to break my heart!
      Please don't!
      *~Huntress~*

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    !!!


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    December 3, 2008
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    Bonus points for originality. Nicely done. Thank you for your entry & good luck in the contest!