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Christmas

Celebrate
Holy
Realization
In
Spirit
Tidings
Mistletoe
And
Snowflakes

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Acrostic poem
Words: Celebrate, Holy, Spirit, Tidings, Mistletoe, and Snowflakes

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  • John BoSox
    August 21

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    I enjoyed this style.This is new for me..I believe you did a great jok..Keep it up

    John


  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 20, 2008
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    This is an interesting acrostic - I would left-align instead of center-align so that the first letters are lines up and it is more clearly seen as an acrostic - other than that I think it is really clever using the words from the wordbank like that

    Merry Christmas

    Polly


  • little-hug
    December 8, 2008

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    This is nice and has lots of potential but I agree that it could be even better if you made 9 sentences with the words. At the moment, the words don't really flow together. I think the aim of the wordbank is to inspire us to create poems around the words, not just list them. Also a little suggestion : It is best not to centre acrostic poems because it is harder to see the word it spells out like that. Hopefully you will be able to revise this and I'll definitely come back to read it again Best of luck!


  • Anna Emkah
    December 6, 2008

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    An Acrostic of 9 words... The first letters form the word "Christmas", which is the title of this poem. It's OK as it is, but you could easily make a real Acrostic poem of it with nine sentences, starting with the words you already have. Just have another look and try it. I am sure you will get a much better poem then!
    Anna.