I lay here my body positioned just so
Inviting and pleasing, your own private show
I wait for you to enter my room
Envisioning the pleasure we will share soon
Your smoldering gaze burns tattoos on my skin
Igniting the fires from deep within
Your body is searing as we begin
Inhaling your scent, my head starts to spin
Your touch is delectable, made only for me
I forget the real world, you're all I can see
I've conjured you to love me forever
Knowing that we'll never be together
I return each night hoping you will stop by
I know it's not right, but you're my fantasy guy
You exist in real life, but with a different view
I cannot help being infatuated with you
I'll chat with you later and pretend nothing's wrong
But in my head plays a tired swan song
Mourning the fact that we will never meet
But yearning to see you again in my sleep
Author notes
This person will probably never speak to me again after this....but I still have my dreams...
this person knows who they are and i have at least 5 poems written about them with pretty much the same theme....they can be connected....i chose this one because its the most obvious......it all started with a dream......if anyone is really interested they all have the same backrounds and are all erotics
A contest entry
- Infatuation by Jeremy0826.
900 points, ended December 4, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Personally sensual (or erotic) by The D O M.
1000 points, ended December 22, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ahhhhh, tell me who is the fabulous guy? that has captured your heart, infatuation. Sounds good and true, just never become blue. All the best.
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Great stuff!
I hope you are being spoken to still!
Very enjoyable poetry and well expressed piece, I suspect this is a common theme on AP!!!
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Intoxicating
This..was wow, every verse and line, was wow, lol I don't even know where to start or how to start for that matter, this was written extremely well and Like the gentleman below me....Very Steamy...
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steamy write my friend,
with nice rhythem and flow aswell
All the best to you in the contest
ken
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I love this write and infactuation it is! You did a great job on this Good lluck in the contest hon
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oh Jenn... so beautiful, and sensual! I also read the authors notes... and the sheepish grin is awesome! your rhyming is superb and meaning- totally received!
woo woo chickee!
becca!
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LOL! I love the way that you wrote your Author's Notes with that grin! hehe You did a great job with this piece. Thanks a lot for taking the time to enter my contest. Good luck to you with it!
Jeremy0826
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