I taste the sweetness of your skin,
the saltiness that lies within.
The flavors that I taste in you
each time seem new.
Your fervored cries as I slide in,
your passion burning ‘neath your skin,
in pleasure’s union, I’m complete
as I melt within your heat.
Author notes
Prompt: Sex, lust, craving
Picture Credit: www.deviantart.com
50 lusty words
A contest entry
- Seductive Max 50 words 20 poets not a PIF by Unconscious-Energy.
1200 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Owwwwwwwwwww naughty but nice
a tasty hot one thats for sure
Pleasures the needs
Yet sensually beautiful
Best wishes and good luck to you
Julie
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well then, I guess this just says it all.. You sure know what your talking about... Lol. wonderfully written with such passion. 
best of luck!
Angel
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LOL - it's all rumor, dear... Thank you for the read and comment
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Wow, I won't bother entering hahaha I can't touch thislol
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Sure you can... but I'll take that as a compliment Thank you for taking the time to read and comment... it is very much appreciated...
K
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WOW!!! I should take my entry out!!! I love it ! Good luck to you in the contest hon
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