A hand ties ribboned gifts;
awareness to hearts' wishes.
Author notes
by x Gemini x
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4809975
A contest entry
- 2 of 3 rounds of Christmas contests by daviscth.
2000 points, ended December 8, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So few words shared in a simple action of the gifts and bows, but such a large emotional uplift in the receiving and giving. Just like this, simple human magic at its best. Well done you.
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wow this was so short yet so deep and emotional very well done gemi
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This is a wonderful sentence for your two words. Thank you for taking time to share in my contest.
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