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Hot Pursuits

1. My tears are polished with transparency.
2. The longer I look in the mirror the farther away I get.
3. tantalizing honey gives me a 'rush'
  my head throbs from sunlight
I feel a disconnect in your presence
Those joy-bells ring every hour on the hour
As I sniff the rose petals I think of you
4. Success throbs like the rush of flush tones
5. Marissa the sex goddess landed in Maine
6. Marissa actually changed courses landing in Niagara Falls
7. If she really was a sex goddess how can she prove it?
8. shapely waterloggs
9. When you call my stomach does not do flips
10."Write me a poem about night"
11.The silly songs of silence
12.Cradled in the snow I feel warmed and fuzzy
13.The mirror is distorting my image
14.Packy Wacky falls in love again
15.When I come have the coffee hot and tantalizing
for its Winter here in Wisconsin
16.The rough silk irritates my skin
17.I love you more than you can handle
18.Cest la vie
19."Being a seashell I am limited in my cognitive abilities, but, I
still faintly hear you"
20.Marissa has ran out of groovy moves but still maintains her title.

Author notes

Twenty Little Poetry Projects – an exercise from Jim Simmerman.
Wow, I did it, whatever it was hahahaha lol

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  • Judith Chandler
    December 6, 2008

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    Some interesting images and ideas here. I think you could develop Marissa into quite a remarkable figure.


    • 2lullabyhaven
      December 8, 2008
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      Hahaha perhaps you are right hahaha she already has a remarkable foundation

  • goalsv
    December 3, 2008
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    Interesting project, you did it well. Tuff challenge and you rose to the occasion.


  • just mercedes gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Wow - meaning is dancing here just out of reach - what a great poem you've written, in spite of your 'whatever it was' I hope you had fun doing it. Thank you for this entry.

    • 2lullabyhaven
      December 3, 2008
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      I really, really did have a ball with this, I claim no responsibility for the 'outcome' hahha but I incorporate all of the fun of it lol

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