twilight beckons
daylight‘s hold diminished now
Winters longest night
hours spent in your embrace
vanish like a shooting star
In a list
A contest entry
- Short Love Poems (PW'S OPEN ) by misticmoonlite.
650 points, ended January 12, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh nice one
nature shines on poets hands to pen their best, thank you for this entry....good luck
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again my humble thanks
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Wow... Nicely done...
Such imagery within that enthralled throughout...
Thank you so much for introducing me to Tanka, I'm really enjoying reading & writing them...
Well penned, well versed, well done!!!
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Excellent
A very fine write, indeed. You express your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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ah thanks my friend Namaste
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Bravo!!!!
Very meaningful and well said in such few words....
From beggining to end your poem here is perfecet!!!!!
I totally feel it!
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my humble thanks
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Perfect.
not much more to say than that.
Love,
Jin
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Namaste my friend thank you
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Perfect.
not much more to say than that.
Love,
Jin
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A lovely gem, to sparkle with the others in your poetic crown.
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Lovely!
WOW! This poem's just superb! Wonderful imagery and feeling! You've got it caught here! A moment in time in wondrous words! Thank you for this inspirational and (sexy) love filled poem. extra god work!
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thank you
I am learning, the fire has been lit
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