You watch her,
Wanting her,
Needing her.
She's the air you breathe,
The reason you get up in the morning.
A smile from her,
Only ignites you more.
She doesn't know
She mustn't know,
Not until it's time
Not until you're ready.
Her smell intoxicates you,
Barely leaves you hanging on.
Just a little longer and she'll be yours,
All you need's a little patience.
Can you wait
Can you hold out.
The moment will come,
Just wait for it.
Soon it will be worth it,
Just wait.
Author notes
Infatuation: A foolish, unreasoning, or extravagant passion or attraction.
An object of extravagant, short-lived passion
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Infatuation is the perfect word for the piece you've written. You are truly talented. This is a terrific write! Keep up the good writing!
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Well, you got infatuation down patt. good job. : )
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pretty impressive poem very good read .x.
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Wonderful poem
Yes, infatuation tends to get the best of people -
I love this one! Thanks a lot for taking the time to write for my contest. I appreciate your entry and wish you the best of luck with it.
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Likes it. this gives it a really good feel when one is inbetween lust, love and infatuation. nicely done.
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