My knight in shining armour fell.
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six word memoirs
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A contest entry
- 6 Word Memoirs by Bean Sidhe.
400 points, ended December 17, 2008, 35 entries
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i like the first word it holds everything - then the second word smiles as it is gallant and bold, armoured love. in is like a jousty thing, shining is well that speaks for itself really, it shines - armour me armour lol and finall fell, like a tree in the words, no one heard him fall
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I love this review, you made them come alive for me...smilethanks
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He must have been a mighty small knight if all he made was a pity pat when he fell.
Yeah, lots of us have heard that thud of knights and maidens hitting the floor.
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Hahaha a knight remains a knight, he still has my heart for whatever that is worth - you've given me my first smile of the day...thanks lol
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HA HA! I love this! that sounds like mine
ah, so clumsy, but then again, so am I!
he he ...I like this one
good luck
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Thank you hahaha he's still my knight hahahaha just slightly bruised is all lol
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Interesting. Points for originality! Thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest!
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Thank you...the truth always stands as original...I thinklol
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Bravo!
best wishes in the contest!
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Thanks for your review, I appreciate lol
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lol...great memoir!!!!
Good luck with it!
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hahaha he's the one needing the 'luck' hahaha thanks
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