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Revisited

Imagination spurring sensual thoughts
You have returned
You guide my hands to your favorite places
Passion envelops us
Feel your desire matching mine
A glimpse of tattoo, a flash of a smile
And we're united
We are moving in tandem
Toward ecstasy as only we can
Soaring to release
Sleeping to revisit

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  • Unconscious-Energy
    December 11, 2008
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    Very sensual indeed, well done.


  • KayJay
    December 3, 2008

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    Nice... very sensual and erotic without going over the top (no pun intended ). A wonderfully imaginative write... Best of luck.
    Ken