Come watch the sunrise with me,
the beautiful symphony of colours,
made for the world to see,
and now it’s only ours.
The moment when the beauty leaves the earth
and kisses the sky.
The moment full of magic, by your side.
One second and the darkness is gone,
say 'hello' to another day, another hope.
The sun finds its way to the sky
and we will find our way as well.
No one can win without a try!
Just give your best, give it all,
to keep that smile upon your face.
Suddenly, the light shows us the path.
Our hearts, full of dreams, have found their way.
Disappearing in the light, you and me, side by side,
only happiness ahead of us.
Author notes
My bright phase. We all have one, right? This piece is dedicated to a dear friend. 
A contest entry
- Nature, Life, Stories, etc, Lots Of Catagories! 5 Entries, EACH!!! by Daisy Ballerina.
1076 points, ended January 6, 39 entries
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Beautiful poem with inspirational words--a reflection of you. Nicely written!
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Thank you! This poem is one of my personal favourites cause it reminds me of a dear friend.
Nela
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very good write
I love the upbeat tone of this. I've read so many dark painful writes lately, that it's refreshing to see something sunny. Thanks
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Thank you for stopping by and reading! I write to express my emotions and this is, there are some dark and some optimistic ones I wrote.
Nela
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So glad to see someone actually penned something uplifting and hopeful using the prompt! Thanks for entering and best wishes.
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You're welcome! Thanks for commenting.
Nela
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wow this is pretty good...keep up the good work....good luck in your other contests and in mine....and thank you for entering...
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lol, look at your user in the author notes...
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This is beautiful....
I love it!!!!
Thank you for entering my contest!
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Great Emotion
THe clearity in this poem is very good and it really grasps the readers attention.
Great Poem
Great Author!
Keep up the fantastic work!!!!!!!!!
~ TRILL
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Very beautiful.
Nice poem. Very beautiful. I especially liked the lines: Come watch the sunrise with me
The beautiful symphony of colours
Made for the world to see
And now it’s only ours
Very, very good. I love it. Write on!
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its a good i i like it and it has a lot of emotion
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its a good poem. it is full of emotion.
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aww... i REALLY enjoy this and is ALL happy and not sad...
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