I belong, between those shallow thighs of yours,
Those taunting breast begging to be suckled.
Your body begging to be stroke, I compel.
Kisses spreading, slowly heading south
Your hidden garden has a fruit I most like to taste
Sweet and nectar ripen and ready to be loved.
A contest entry
- Seductive Max 50 words 20 poets not a PIF by Unconscious-Energy.
1200 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent write, well done..
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Nicely done! Sensual imagery and lovely metaphor throughout...very strong visional in so few words...
Best to you!
mystic
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very naughty here and I like it! good luck in the contest hon
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Nicely done... sensual imagery and lovely metaphors that are sure to arouse Best of luck.
Ken
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i try.. but you know after reading so many romance novel you start having a very vivid lol imagination.
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