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The Ring and Immortality

A small circle,
Cast in pure gold.
Adorned with a emerald,
That pulses in the light.
You realize that it has power,
This ring that is fairly adorned.
So you slip it onto your small finger,
Only to see how it looks.
The ring of power is so beautiful,
So you keep it for yourself.
And it gives you the thing,
That you desire most,
Which is Immortality.

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