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Happy Birthday Daddy



Hope you find this
At heaven's gate,
Please forgive me,
Pretend it's not late.
Yesterday, the words just wouldn't come.

But please know,
It was in my heart,
Resounding with every beat,
The thoughts and memories,
Helping me through every day,
Daddy you are near,
Another day, another year,
You are still alive in my heart.



Happy Birthday Daddy
I love you
I miss you


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Yesterday, Dec. 2 would have been my Dad's 71 birthday. We lost him Jan. 5, 2005...

Happy Birthday Daddy

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    December 29, 2008
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    Death hurts especailly when it's a parent. Good write.


  • BethanyBoo
    December 4, 2008
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    Is your daddy a star? It is a sad poem but it is pretty and I think that your daddy wuold like it.


    • StarEyes
      December 6, 2008
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      Yes, Baby, My daddy is a star now. And I know his light is shining on me, I just wanted to share my thoughts and feelings with him.

      and love

      Nanna


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Hi Twinys,

    Sweety, I know more than most how you feel and how much you miss and love your dad. These are the feelings that we share. Our dad's are the reason we are close. He knows your feelings from heaven, he is still with you, and he loves and misses you just as much as you do him. Your words are as beautiful as you are.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Love Ya,
    Your Twin,
    Joyce

  • Francis Vincent
    December 3, 2008

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    good job

    lots of old fashioned family love there
    for the guy we all know
    it's nice you versed your rememberance
    you are a good daughter


  • PreciousCowgirl
    December 3, 2008
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    Wow, Wonderful!


  • FaerieNWonderland
    December 3, 2008

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    this is great.
    i do believe we don't always have to say what's in our heart for our loved ones who have passed can always just feel it.
    i really enjoyed reading this!

    your Faerie


  • Desire gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Aaaaaaaaw~

    Oh My this swells the eyes Beautiful!!
    Touches deep and Happy Birthday to Your Daddy also who from what I sense~ A Magnificent person~ Love oozing from Spirit
    I'm Honored to be reeading this Precious!!

    Love this!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • Bob Fox
    December 3, 2008

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    Poet

    this is just beautiful. As a father even more special Dad is smiling down on you. Almost brought a tear poet.


  • EmeraldDreams
    December 3, 2008

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    Oh honey, how moving this is! And what a wonderful tribute to who I am sure was a wonderful man.


    • StarEyes
      December 3, 2008
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      Daddy was amazing! I think one of the things I miss the most about him,
      is the child-like spirit that came alive durning the holidays...


  • Amera gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    This is beautiful! Is your dad's birthday today? So is mine! We have so much in common.

    Love,
    Amera♥

    • StarEyes
      December 3, 2008
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      No, it was yesterday... He would have turned 71...


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 3, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Very well penned heart felt piece and yes they are within us and will forever be


    • StarEyes
      December 3, 2008
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      Thanks Patty. I do miss my daddy... And especially at this time of the year, he had such a child like spirit during the holidays, it was so fun watching him.

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