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Bike Ride. Road Crash. Big Hurts.

A contest entry

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  • Morodrin
    April 21

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    Quirky. Dig it.

    This is one of those poems where I want to express my amusement and approval, but don't really know what words to use.
    Awesome. Those six words spur the memory of just about every bike accident I've ever had. Good job. Very funny.


  • Chocolate Dime
    January 18
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    tee. i can only imagine...


  • Nephlim
    January 2
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    xD Interesting poem! So truuee.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    Life will give ya some scraped knees once in a while! OUCH ...those always burn!

    good write


  • AnotherName
    December 3, 2008

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    OUCH! Don't you just hate that? I haven't fallen off a bike in sometime but then, I haven't ridden a bike in a couple of Summers. I felt this poem. Great job! Good Luck!



  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    December 3, 2008
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    Good job! Thank you for your entry & good luck in the contest.

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