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~ Better at High Speed ~



~ "Bugs-taste-better-at-high-Speeds"! ~


A contest entry

How and what did it make you feel?

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  • Away From the Sun
    December 4, 2008

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    Yummy...I've noticed that myself. They are like jalapenos at high speed, more like just kinda "spicy" when you just grab them on your tongue as you are walking beneath a tree...

    hehehe


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    oh, this is good!! - well not the bug tasting part ...just the write...

    eww ...lol

    good luck


  • Griswold
    December 3, 2008

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    Well, I dont know about the taste, but they do splatter better at speed. Best of luck to you...Scott


  • AnotherName
    December 3, 2008

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    Oh my! This reminds me of the body count I find on my windshield when I come in from commuting to work. LOL Great imagery an d a wonderful use of six words. LOL Good Luck!


  • 2lullabyhaven
    December 3, 2008
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    LOL hahaha I'll take your 'word' for it too hahaha


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    December 3, 2008

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    Hee hee - very true - that's why I always ride on the back of the bike. That way, the man gets all the bug guts! Nicely done. Thank you for your entry & good luck in the contest!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 3, 2008
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    LOL! I'll take your word for it!
    Good luck to you with this one.




    Jeremy0826

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