Lost deep within a vision quest
I heard a soft voice call
Whispered softly on the night
Echoing off the canyon wall
It brought me back to the place
On the flat rock in the sun
And seemed to reach in to my heart
Where love and dreams are one
It called me a woman's song
Sweet and tender words
Moving in the souls lost rooms
Like a vision seen not heard
It seems to haunt me to this day
As I wander lost in the sun
Trying to find the dream not lost
The love the real true one
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Can't really say much about this one that I haven't said about everything you write other than... sigh...
They are all so touching.
The imagery is beautiful, romantic and sincere. It's as if I was taking a walk with you through the canyon and experiancing the moment.
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Beautifully Intoxicating!!
Hi John, I really enjoyed reading this thoughtful and tenderly poignant write. You seem to always reach deep within your muse's soul to pull out and surprise your readers with a fresh and lovely poem from the heart. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you all the best, today and always. Take care!! Peace, love & hugs xx Cyn 
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Lovely Poem
John, What a sweet love poem. you have pened. Your words are always from you heart and touch the reader in many ways. Tis so hard to find lasting love in this crazy world. I always get lost in thought as I rwead your poetry. You rhyme so well too. Hugs and Smiles, Blessing of love,
Sandy
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