Trying to speak without breathing too hard
Loosing thoughts and pacing
Forth and back, apart from reality
Because this truly can not be real
Five years of friendship, love, and laughs
Gone within an instant, lit aflame
The crash, destruction, annihilation
You are dead; you are gone forevermore
But I hear you breathing in the corner
Standing without me, but standing tall
You say you cried, forgetting me like that
I say you died, writing those words
My boyfriend tries to hold my hand
While wiping tears with his own
And attempts to comfort my broken heart
But I am fading, slowly but surly, I am
I loved him with everything I had
I took for granted the love he gave in return
And now while he is standing tall
I am standing alone...
Author notes
Message if you want to know what happened, it's too long of a story to relate here. =/
[no, this is not about breaking up with someone, I'm not THAT childish]
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Very heart felt piece. Well written and easy to understand. It does come off as a little vague. People who know you would understand this better. But what about the rest of us? Thanks for the entry.
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Thanks for joining in our contest, I could take this poem a few ways for one, a break up but hence you saying it is not, I will state what it leaves me to dwell in perhaps, a death and ghostly visits?
Thanks for joning in warm thoughts.
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and though he may have come and gone from your life, you my dear are still standing! This was a deeply emotional and hearfelt write that I am sure still stings the heart! Thanks for your entry.
Blessings and best wishes,
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Wow, oeople come in and out of lives. We don't understand why they leave. Good luck to you in the contest.
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Thanks for your entry. Good luck in the contest
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Very touching. Nice job. Good luck in my contest!
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Oh my goodness, I put option two instead of option three, I'm sorry! I fixed it. x[
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