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Newton was right

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Three thirty years ago,
Sir Isaac Newton said,
"To every action there is,
an equal and opposite reaction."
I kissed a girl in a park,
She pushed me back so hard,
three thirty years later,
I learned that he was right.

Author notes

Sir Isaac Newton(Born: 4 Jan 1643 in Woolsthorpe, Lincolnshire, England
Died: 31 March 1727 in London, England) was the greatest English mathematician of his generation. He laid the foundation for differential and integral calculus. His work on optics and gravitation make him one of the greatest scientists the world has known.
the image of Newton is from en wikipedia. William Blake's ''Newton'' (1795), colour print with pen & ink and watercolour. Blake's picture of Newton as a divine geometer was one of a series he created whilst living in Lambeth in the late [)

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  • Ms-Mouse
    January 5
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    Imeasurable

  • Saima
    December 26, 2008
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    very nice

    Newton was of course right, kissing a girl in a park is not good dear Sir


  • hamid
    December 18, 2008

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    At last

    Qasi Sab at last at last i found a mistake in your poem, In the second last line the spelling of thirty.
    Howz that! Be happy and enjoy England!


    • Ahkam silver member
      December 18, 2008
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      thnx

      hey thnx for your careful read, now the correction is made,but you havent said anything about the poem!!!


  • line shakes
    December 11, 2008

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    Newton is of course right. Nice write, Ahkam. " Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love"- Albert Eistein. I have not been writting much these days..ahkam, you know. Anyway there are some jottings some where in my journal and will try to post them for you. Be well my well wisher.

    • Ahkam silver member
      December 12, 2008
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      Thnx

      Hey its a very nice quote, me, being a scientest,never knew that this wonderful quote was by Great Albert Einstien.thanks for you nice sharing of the thought.Here is one for you;
      "To love is to suffer. To avoid suffering one must not love. But then one suffers from not loving. Therefore to love is to suffer, not to love is to suffer. To suffer is to suffer. To be happy is to love. To be happy then is to suffer. But suffering makes one unhappy. Therefore, to be unhappy one must love, or love to suffer, or suffer from too much happiness. I hope you're getting this down."(Woody Allen)


  • rhondasail
    December 3, 2008

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    Hmmmm...and your reaction to that of hers was?...hahahaha...Interesting twist to Newtonian thought. I like it Ahkam...Nice to see you writing again, and with such a pointy pen. Peace, Rhonda


  • IronIcecream
    December 3, 2008

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    I htink people never learn that no one is right
    only the fallen or bitten apples
    all this system of laws invented only to remind us
    that we can only be wrong
    still we're only feeling guilty for doing it
    and that makes it all false
    like any action built up on justification
    turns away from its purpose of self expression to an impersonal lifeless generality

    it's how we surrender to gravitation and gravity


  • Anu-Nataraj
    December 3, 2008

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    i don get it ????
    the last line..?
    what does it meaan??? i reli donno..
    could u please xplain ??

    Prison-Break-Fa

    • Ahkam silver member
      December 3, 2008
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      Newton'sThird law

      Prison-Break-Fa its that my action was to get closer and her reaction was to push me away, so I realized that Newton was right


      • Anu-Nataraj
        December 3, 2008
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        :D OHH!

        OHH!
        hahahahaha
        awesome poem dude !

        reli nice...funy...hahaha....
        nice work on your physics !

        haha
        cya
        PBF


        • Ahkam silver member
          December 3, 2008
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          Thnx

          Thnx pal that you like it,
          Peace


  • FaerieNWonderland
    December 3, 2008

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    this kinda made me laugh at the end. it is an amazing piece. short but tells a entire story in these few words.

    your Faerie


  • parachute fog
    December 3, 2008

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    the title gave away the poem in almost it's entirety, although the idea behind this one was good- almost bukowski esque, simplistic & intresting.

    thirt? herbs?


  • lake of dremas
    December 3, 2008
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    lol , nice


    • Ahkam silver member
      December 3, 2008
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      But I kissed

      "The person who says it cannot be done should not interrupt the person doing it."
      Chinese proverb

    • Ahkam silver member
      December 3, 2008
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      Thnx

      well, I believe there are no rules aplicable on love and dreams.Newton was right but I was wrong, still I mantain that he is right...

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