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You Taught Me How To Love

You came, when life was dark 
brought light
and love with you:

Like a jug full of wholesome goodness you
poured that love
over me,

Drenching me,
in the understanding
that I can love like you, now I do.

Optimism resounds in me,
thanks to you and your heart,
that I see clearly.

You came with arms open wide
and allowed me to step inside your
embrace ...

I draw no curtains,
I'm myself with you ...
all the time.

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  • DenyMyLove
    August 13

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    Very beautiful!! I know what it's like to have someone bring light into your endless darkness and show you that love is possible. A wonderful tribute to that magical person!!!! Very well written!!!!

    ~DAWN~


  • Debbie Hansman
    December 7, 2008

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    I found this to be such a beautiful write. I really enjoyed reading this!

    debbie


  • Kal-El
    December 3, 2008
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    Well I find no words to express what I want to say I will just agree with wolf mistress


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    December 3, 2008

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    Wow..this is a beautiful dedication for a special someone...he or she should be very lucky to have a friend like you..
    Sometimes a person can mean so much in our lives...and you penned it down so beautiful..

    Beautiful

    XXJeannette

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