Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Stuck.

I was stuck most of my life in the dark,
then i found a spark.
I started breaking free,
saw the star in me.

And i don't care what nasty people say,
because i ignoure them and have a nice day!
and i help others around me,
because i want them as well- to laugh with glee.
So everyone stand up and say
i am proud this very day!

xxxx

Do you think this poem is good?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Susan John Francis
    December 3, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    nice write.


  • horsey4eva
    December 3, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    I find this poem good not sure if everyone else will or not. but i think in a way it inspires others to break free and get out there and be proud of yourself. no one deserves sadness and such sorrow xx