Your suns burnt eons long -
using skies as focal points
while I tipped,
off balance;
with $2 candles for daylight.
Author notes
Prompt::
"finespun are fate's lines
never diminutive;
though sometimes -
short" - Mark Griffin
I counted "$2" as one word...
And this is poop... again
A contest entry
- Quickie for some lucky 5 not sleeping by Cerulean Sunrise.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honesty would be lovely
Comments
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very nice poem you have here my sister I think this poem should be centered i dont know just a thought but other then that great poem great job on the trophy it was a winner I'm glad they saw that keep on writing my sister and i will keep on reading
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I would say that you greatly underestimate the quality of this write. This was an interesting and creative take on the prompt. A well deserved win, indeed. Thanks for sharing.
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nice take on the prompt . . congrats on the gold !!
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Your authors notes sound so much like me
I can't seem to get any satisfaction from what I write lately ... but I have to say your "poop" is far, far better than mine
Congrats on Gold
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This is an awesome take on the prompt. Very unique. Congratulations on the Gold.
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Seee
not poop!!!!!
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Very original... the title is unique as well..
becca
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Not poop but brilliance.
I love the title. -
lol not poop
I like the thought of the candle dripping same as age it finally dies 
C
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