Her destiny struck with stardom;
Loneliness' exit.
Velvet dreams weaved.
Slowly,
essence of life
stills in air...
... abandoned by fate.
Author notes
Prompt:
"finespun are fate's lines
never diminutive;
though sometimes -
short" - Mark Griffin
20 words.
Picture Credit: http://sulejman.deviantart.com/art/Abandoned-40435271
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie for some lucky 5 not sleeping by Cerulean Sunrise.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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BEAUTIFUL!!!
So often one finds stardom only to have it disappear without warning.
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Well written piece
From that prompt you created such a unique poem
Loved it
Best wishes to you
Love Julie
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Fate is but a cruel mistress that puts on the guise of something divine, but i guess that is all in the mind. Love the poem keep it flowing
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This poem is so sweet. The imagery in it absolutely amazing. The word usage is brilliant. God bless you always and best wishes to you in the contest.
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This was touching. A beautiful write. Very strong in nature.
Good luck in the contest love.
Alyzeh
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I like it very much.
A good picture you paint.
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Thank you for your kind comment. Glad that you like it! And thank you for the points. Hehe. You did not have to though!
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Very eell expressed.
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Great write once again! You totally nailed it!
much love,
becca
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Time's about up..
A minute or two and I will judge. -
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Sorry. I had to switch desks at work!
Great quickie. Prompt was very challenging. Sorry you did not get to read this. Hehe. It's not even that good anyway! Haha.
Much love
Ylova
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