Holding a blade to your skin hurts me as much as it hurts you,
and my trust for you die's a little more tonight,
the skin splits a little more than anticipated,
this time, the gash deepens,
why do this to my already severing heart,
its beating a broken melody form tonight on,
the pain goes on and plays the strings of my heart,
a distant song beings to play,
and all because of this broken promise we shared,
the blade deepens into your flesh,
i cringe just to the sight of the blood flow out,
this time its worse than the ones before,
the blood just wont stop flowing,
and your skin begins discolor,
a pale pasty Grey color fills your skin,
am i going to lose the only one who means anything to me?
i know its wrong,
but i reach for the razor that severed your bleeding veins,
and take to to my own,
you're lying still in my arms,
not strong enough to hold on to some of you're last breath,
bleeding together you're here,
theres nothing i fear,
we'll stay forever this way,
you are safe in my heart,
and my heart will go on..
i love you....
be brutaly honest
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This poem is awesome, and I mean that with my heart, this poem was written cos of a line I made on msn, and I do not regret it one single bit at all because of what it's turned into.
Each time I read over this poem it seems to mean more and more to me, and some times I can even picture the image as I read through it, and this helps me understand the meaning of it a whole lot more.
The last six lines are what mean the most to me when I read over it, they're the most awesome part about it.
LOVE YOU JADE -- So freakin' much
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awesome
Awesome poem Jade, really well written, and to believe the first line comes from me.
Ily Jade, you mean a lot to me, keep it that way.
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i wrote this peom
for two of my firends
justin and jess
i love you's
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