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weaves indelible

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colors he weaves
immortal,
coming along in birth
display splendor of rainbow
packing in minute molecule.

green never dries up
leaves at once painted
with pores in place
work of minuscule detail.

his colors, non toxic,
transform,
without losing sheen.
autumn brown is indelible
as tender born's green.

his light travels in white
blows into seven.
scratch them with diamond
they do not fade,
wet them in down pour
colors are not washed.

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A contest entry for:
the colorful thread ...

We are the colorful thread and HE is the weaver...Unknown.

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  • maralisa silver member
    December 4, 2008
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    a great take onthe promt dad i loveyour imagery no colour hug*maralisa


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 3, 2008

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    yes they do not fade..you are so true and so much factual revealing the universal truth of this world...thank you for your wonderful entry...


  • chilali
    December 3, 2008

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    Wow. This is such a beautiful piece indeed. Thank you so much for sharing this with me Good luck to you in the contest.

    Much love
    Ylova