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Elven Gift

Missing image
Stars nova, lamenting their loss.
Yearning darkness inhales galaxies
that God replaces, gently effacing time.

The Daoine Sídhe,
Angels who took no side
in God or Lucifer's crimson-handed strife;
expelled from heaven and hell.

Wise Gaia welcomed
martyred earthbound exiles.

Eons passed unnoticed...

Feasting in palace mounds
and riding lily-white palfreys;
braided ribbons, charms, bells
in their tossing manes and tails.
Promenading sweet-grass meadows,
singing moon-rise benedictions.

A daughter of man drew close
drawn by quicksilver music one eve;
she listened and was transformed,
bright moonlight married her soul.

Her heirs carry this Elven gift,
rare art and silver-tongued poetry;
sometimes leaping generations,
yet full flower in artful poets
penning supple-moonlit magic.




Author notes

Contest; A toast to AP's Favorite ~ Amera ~ promt
Picture artist: Dan Lacey
picture credit, my own of the full moon taken from my house

Happy AP birthday my loving and wonderful friend. You are a light and a blessing, shining for all to see.

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    December 31, 2008

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    Amazing! I love this poem! thank you so much for entering the birthday celebration contest and making Amera feel special on her 2nd AP Bday.
    Take care
    Becks


    • Skybow silver member
      December 31, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment and for holding this contest honoring Amera.


  • Amera gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Wow! I don't know what to say! This is really beautiful. I'm saving this poem in my treasure room to read and re-read over and over. I can't thank you enough. I must admit that I had to look up; Daoine Sídhe, so I learned something as well. Thank you so much!

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • Skybow silver member
      December 3, 2008
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      If my pen has any strength today it is because you took me in your arms guiding my first poetic steps. Because you gave me help, tempered with your compassionate knowledge. I was an egg, you gave me a nest and rainbow wings.

      I love you Amera, happy AP birthday


  • Draig aine gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    gift

    Her heirs carry this Elven gift
    rare art and silver-tongued poetry
    sometimes skipping generations
    Yet full flower in lovely Amera,
    penning soft-moonlit magic
    to charm her loving friends

    oh my her gift indeed you have love it


    • Skybow silver member
      December 3, 2008
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      Thank you my Bardic friend. If you liked this I must have done something right. I admire your writes along these lines immensely.

      Namaste

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