A child asked a snail, "Sir?
Is your house warm?"
He answered, "Sure."
Author notes
This was Jessie's question to me this morning when she woke up, "Mommy, are snail houses warm?"
photo: http://www.auf-dem-hoechsten.de/html/body_schnirkelschnecken.html
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (E) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I would have given 5 extra marks if it was a stanzas.
anyway, so cute piece, I loved it. Prayers and wishes for you lovely daughter, and also a kiss on cheek
thanks for sharing
Likeness, Age comparison, words,Beauty, Ideas, Thoughts,Title, level of poetry
these all contains 100 marks, and i will mark out of hundred to let you win
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you scored 59.5
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the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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This is brilliant! What a wonderful way to use the chosen prompt. Short but says it all. Bravo, take a bow.
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More of these.
Please.
(what the kid's say at the link you posted is also pricesless:
I have a snail. Is it cool or gross?
I did not find snail, but I found some worms...) -
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hahaha arw this was sooo cute! I adore this. It's so sweet. And it was a great response to the question. I've always wondered about little things like that as well. I wonder how it gets in the summer
xxx
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nice write.
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Nothing is more precious that things children say. I loved this. I write about my grandson a lot. Best wishes in the contest dear.
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Very sweet.
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