Once you get to know me, you'll love me,
i can't possibly be this bitch that doesn't care,
This girl that wants you to leave
Unable to stand your irritation
For no more than a minute
While i pretend to care.
Leaving in the middle of a very
Important, impossibly boring
Monologue in which you have
Said nothing but have confirmed
My deepest, and most passionate
Desire to shoot you in the face.
I could not possibly be this bitch
This girl that just does not care
Ha, I LIED, now get out my face.
A contest entry
- Nevaeh by Whispered Devotions.
900 points, ended December 17, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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lol awww that's mean... I must admit that it is rather humorous but mean never the less. I would hate to be the person at the other end of your scorn. I liked how the end came around and contradicted the whole poem... kinda like a verbal smack in the face kinda thing.
nice write, thank you for entering.
Amy
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