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Melody of Pleasures

Taking a leisurely drive in our convertible

enjoying the warm spring air

CD bringing enticing instrumental tunes,

relaxing under the rhythmic sway of the racing spell,

all the cares of the world swallowed

as we begin the ascent on the snaking mountain roads.

 

Exchanging glances with curl of lips,

eyes knowing the harmony of hearts

that will play once we reach our lover’s hideaway.

 

 

Insides swirling with anticipation as we enter the lobby,

bags taken to room by the staff

so we can stroll hand in hand

to inhale the pine scent

while gazing over the cascading waterfall,

letting the rushing sound sooth our souls

before wandering the trees,

speaking the soft affections between long kisses

and tender embraces.

Standing wrapped in each other’s arms,

watching the stunning sunset,

allowing its magic to enchant in a mesmerizing spell.

 

 

Making our way back to the room,

mind feeling so lightheaded

from the power of passion’s charms.

 

 

Sitting next to the fire

savoring the wine and cheese,

music on the stereo

playing love songs,

bouquets of lavender and lilac perfuming the air,

only other light

comes from candles with aroma

of almond and cinnamon.

 

Running fingers through her hair,

whispers cooed my adoration

for the beauty she possesses,

deep wet kisses seal our surrender to rising needs.

 

Standing up and slow dancing so tightly

unto sounds of romance filling the air

until her eyes offer their invite

unto intimacy’s waiting lair.

 

 

Moving towards our night’s mattress vessel

and its sea of satin ivory sheets

soon it will be our sail to a night of ecstasy,

crumples clothes on floor

stripping away the last distractions

before being utterly submersed

in the tides of intoxicating affection.

Author notes

3) Write a sensual/erotic poem of any kind.

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  • Angels Whispers gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    Hi sweet poet,
    This is so beautiful and very sweet,your gentle words are sensitive and loving, and provides a warm feeling that makes the soul smile,and the heart beast fast.This is such a beautiful poem , combining the exotis and erotic and surrounding the lust, passion and hunger in a bed of love.

    If we searched writer, poets and philosophers could we find a better phrase to describe what we feel in every cell of our body when we are in love?
    I submit we would not.
    What a perfect poem of sensuality, and a delight to experience.
    In my eyes this is an outstanding poem,I enjoyed every line, you have provided excellent imagery for the reader.

    This is indeed, what I call 'A Sensual Write' I love it.
    It is everything that I believe in, and had you been able to submit it into my contest, you would of recieved the gold, because this write that you have penned is totally awesome.

    I hope you recieve the gold in this contest, cause in my eyes, you have already 'won'.
    Brove
    my gifted friend.
    An accomplished poet you are.

    Much love and happiness,
    ~Angel-anne~


















  • Denerica silver member
    December 5, 2008
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    Does any couple do that anymore...LOL very nice to be wisked away in words at least! Well done!


  • Draig aine gold member
    December 3, 2008
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    sublime

    truly seductive


  • Zenda-Lokki
    December 3, 2008
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    Great how you used the pics to help the poem along. I love it.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    This is a very well written write and I love the pictures used with it! You did a great job on this and I can actually see this happening in my mind. Good luck in the contest

    to inhale the pine scent
    while gazing over the cascading waterfall,
    letting the rushing sound sooth our souls
    before wandering the trees,
    speaking the soft affections between long kisses
    and tender embraces.
    Standing wrapped in each other’s arms,
    watching the stunning sunset,
    allowing its magic to enchant in a mesmerizing spell

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