Anger
distress
frustration
insanity
ripping my hair out
my body shaking
and then comes
fault
disappointment
betrayal
confusion
head spinning
body turning cold
and then it hits me all at once
the one thing i didn't want:
depression
tears
anxiety
hurt
face numb
body tired
what more to do,
but to forgive and,
do it all over again another day
Author notes
this is exactly the emotions and feelings i get with a specific person, but i love them so much.
A contest entry
- These Feelings I Feel by Lagrimas.
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i love this!! so much raw emotion and just feeling in it. it was just amazing. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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When it hurts to love
Some love can only harm. But what won't we do even for this love. Thank you and good luck.
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