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Working Man

There is a working man from Bury
Six hundred men under him directly
When he’s making his round
There is nary a sound
He cuts grass at the cemetery

 

 

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  • echo-ink
    February 10
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    cute...I laughed


  • Mrs D
    February 9
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    amuzing !


  • Lanasaur
    January 31

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    lol

    'giigle'i like this limerick best of luck in my contest i really enjoyed this limerick! thanks


  • aboomer silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    cute image - made me smile.
    It sure would be very quiet cutting grass in a cemetary - sure wouldn't want the 'residents' to create a stir there, would ya'????...lol

    thank you for your entry - and for following the guidelines
    best wishes in the contest


  • Pollycheck
    December 26, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my contest. I like this light and jovial style that you used in this poem. It brought a smile to my face.


  • sense surreal gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    it's nice to read something light here on your page, the kind that won't make my nose bleed with high falutin, undecipherable meanings

    please make a lot of these out from jokes


    • Lee Tai Wah
      December 11, 2008
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      Hi Anna Lee

      High falutin undecipherable meanings? ... but I know what you mean. I have difficulty deciphering too.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    December 3, 2008
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    Lee, you are quite skillful in the form,
    and with a great sense of humor!!!!!!

    • Lee Tai Wah
      December 5, 2008
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      Hi Aesthete

      I am just having fun. It's actually based on a joke I read.

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