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Looking to sky

Missing image
light reflecting
through raindrop,
looking mysterious
seven colors sitting
one over the other

boy enacting colors
beads around lips,
rainbow amazing him
standing under sky

misty clouds
carrying dissecting light
revealing dazzling colors
what is 'white'
hidden admixture of seven

mummy tells him
to his delight,
story of light
'a great birthday gift'

A contest entry

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  • BethanyBoo
    December 18, 2008

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    i like the rhyming in this one. And i like rainbows, and it looks pretty. Thank you for entering my competition.