stand down, hands up
let me here what is inside
splitting stitches
tooth and nail
taking back what was taken
never held down
forever rising
let me here it now
breaking bond
ever fly
looking up
never going to die
taking back ever
mine
"revenge a dish best served cold"
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-hystaria
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love it
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Ooh killer ending. That just completed your piece and more ! Wonderful...
Interesting, and deep. I had to think about what exactly must have happened here, but failed ! Lol !
Thank you for your entry and best of luck !
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very deep and thuoght out
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The start was so general, and I love how narrowed things down. The ending, was smack on. The little quote at the end about being served cold, was priceless. You nailed it, great job. Thank you for entering, good luck in the contest :]]
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