Muse
By: Star of Atlantis
dipping into the bath of thought
where the paper melts around a pen
and ink flows gently over skin
like a river of melted snow
but Your mind is warm and soft
and i think i will soak in it a while
creativity is my gift,
but You mold my form
with Your words...
Your song...
Your art...
Your soul!
... i am but an after thought,
as my name is Muse.
Author notes
http://skeletonfishpunk.deviantart.com/art/muse-4584245
pic for this poem i needed to kick mine so she did it...
A contest entry
- for those who have ME on their favorites by leander.
900 points, ended January 2, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please be very detailed in your coments and give me plenty to learn about how you view my piece. thank you.
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I really like that last stanza... very strong and powerful actually.. well done!
Leander
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it seams like forever since i have been on here and so long in fact that i suddenly noticed that i hadnt thanked you for your comment. i am gald that you liked this one in a few ways it kinda reminds me of you.... and the contests you used to run and i used to attempt to write for any way thank you for the read and the comment
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